Shadows of the Mind: A HubNugget Suspense
65Prologue
I sometimes still wake up in the middle of the night, my heart wildly fluttering in my throat like a frightened bird trying to escape. I look wildly around the room expecting to see...well, expecting to see them, hovering in the dark shadowy corners of the room just waiting to pounce.
How long must I spend my nights afraid to sleep, afraid to dream? How long must I spend my days fearing the coming of night? When will these nightmares end?
How It All Began
The day started out pleasantly enough, the sun was shining, the birds were singing, all seemed right with the world. The Hub crew decided, since it was such a beautiful day, to get together for a picnic and work on the HubNugget Nominee list together. After all, 6 heads are better than one. Make that 7 heads, we certainly couldn't leave out Ripplemaker, our official cheerleader.
Anyway, we all planned out who would bring what and where and when we would meet. I got in touch with Jason, Maddie, Simone, and Fawntia to let them know where we would all be so they could get the HubNugget Wannabe's Hubs to us. Even though we had a day off, we really didn't have a day off, if you know what I mean. We still had the deadline to meet. You know, we had to choose the HubNuggets Nominees out of the hundreds of HubNugget Wannabe's. And that's no easy job.
Anyway, the whole group decided to meet by the lake and have a picnic with everyone bringing their favorite dish. RedElf brought her specialty, Blackened Salmon; enelle lamb brought her delicious Grilled Tuna; Patty Inglish came a terrific Chef salad, Zsuzsy Bee brought her tempting Honey Roasted Chicken, ladyjane1 came with a delicious Three Bean Salad, Ripplemaker decided to bring her refreshing Sweet Tea, and me (KoffeeKlatch Gals), well, I decided we needed something sweet so I brought Strawberries with whipped cream, fat free of course.
Well, there we were minding our own business, pigging out and enjoying the view when all of the sudden a giant gust of wind blew over us.
Papers were flying everywhere, the air was thick with our only copies of the HubNugget Wannabe Hubs. Now, I know you must be wondering why all of those Hubs were in hard copy, well, I'm going to tell you. You see just the day before there was a gigantic power surge that knocked out everyone of the computers in the world. Luckily Jason Menayan, our illustrious leader, had a feeling something was going to happen, so he had Simone Smith and Fawntia Fowler, our hub specialists who keep us straight, make copies of all of our new hubbers hubs. Maddie Rudd, our hub cop, reviewed them, made sure they were eligible, and got them to us so we could make our picks for the week.
So when they blew away into the sky I'm sure you can imagine how panicked we became. They were the only copies we had of those hubs. Unless someone somewhere figured out how to get the computers up and running we would, for the first time in Hub History, not get the Hub Nuggget Wannabes Hubs out on time. I (KoffeeKlatch Gals) was particularly panicked because it was my week to do the HubNuggets Hub.
So, there they were flying all about our heads. It was the strangest thing, they would hover about flying towards us and then away again, just out of our reach everytime we tried to catch one. Suddenly, they formed into a group and fly off, looking like a swarm of bees. Unfortunately for us, they flew towards the part of the woods that everyone knew was haunted. We didn't know who or what haunted it but we had heard so many stories that we just knew there had to be a grain of truth in there somewhere. Needless to say we didn't want to go in there but we knew we had to.
But, I digress. We were pigging out, looking at the great scenery and discussing the new hubs when this gigantic wind, I'm talking about monsoon type wind, came rushing through and scattered our papers to the wind, literally.
The Weirdness Begins....
As we stood there watching the papers flying away the skies opened up and began to shower us with a torrential rain. So...we looked at each other took a deep breath and began to run for the cover of the trees. Maybe they would help shield us a little bit from the rain. Wrong thing to do. As we hit the line of spooky, dark, gnarled trees the first blindingly bright flash of lightening occured. It was followed so closly by the loud clap of thunder that the hair stood up on our arms.
What was going to happen next. We couldn't keep running throught the trees with the lightening following us, we needed some kind of shelter. Suddenly there it was, right in front of us. Wait a minute, it wasn't there a few seconds ago. Where did it come from? It seems to have just appeared. Not at all sure they we should trust it, after all, weird things had been happening, we approached it slowly. But the threatening thunder and dangerous lighting, and rain that threatened to drown them convinced us to at least seek cover on the porch.
Carefully picking our way up the front porch steps Patty said the first word spoken since the wind blew away our papers. "I don't like this place."
"It gives me the creeps", said ladyjane1.
"I think I'll just stay out here on the porch. I really don't want to go inside." said RedElf
"I'll stay with you. There's something weird about this house." agreed enelle lamb.
Meanwhile, Zsuzsy Bee had opened the door and was peeking inside. "Look guys, it doesn't look too bad inside. At least we'll be out of the rain."
Looking into one of the windows Ripplemaker siad, "Hey, there's a fireplace, maybe we can build a fire and get warm."
"I'm about to freeze out here." I said, beginning to shiver.
"Shaking off her doubts, Patty said, "Come one, lets gets inside. We certainly can't keep standing out here."
So, inside we go, each of us feeling the stangeness of the house in different ways. It wasn't too bad, at least it wasn't leaking. But there just was that feeling that something was not quite right. The prickling at the back of the neck that let you know there was something watching you. The stangeness seemed to make everyone draw closer together in a little group.
Standing there listening to the quiet, the only sound was the muffeled rain on the roof and the thunder following the still threatening lightening, one by one the group began to relax. Nothing had jumped out at us, nothing had threatened us so far. We began to look around at the room and moving slightly away from each other.
Then it happened... There was a slamming of a door somewhere upstairs, followed by a scurrying sound. The group froze in place for a moment, stunned. Patty finally said "It looks like we might not be the only ones in here."
Zsuzsy yelled out "Come down, we won't hurt you."
We listened and were met with complete silence. "I guess it was just the wind blowing a door shut." said RedElf matter-of-factly.
"Well, what was that scurrying sound?" Asked enelle lamb. "I don't think it was the wind."
"Oh, I'm sure it was just a little animal." said ripplemaker
"I really don't want to do it," I (KoffeeKlatch Gals) said, "But I don't think we have any other choice but to go and see what it was."
So...up the creaking stairs we went. At the top of the stairs was a door facing us. Patty reached out, turned the know and tried to open the door. It wouldn't budge. Inside there was a scurrying, moving sound as though something was locked inside it. We decided it must be a small animal trying to find shelter during the storm.
We moved on to the next door. As we moved down the hall the sound became louder. It was beginning to sound as if it were trapped birds trying to escape. The fluttering of their wings beating against the windows in their effort to reach the outdoors. The sound became louded and louder as we tried each door and found them locked. It had now become so loud that it completely drowned out the sound of the rain and the thunder.
Finally we reached what looked like the door to an attic. "Oh no, I have such a bad feeling about this. Please don't open that door." cried Zsuzsy Bee.
As she was saying that Patty reached over and turned the knob. When she dropped her hand from the knob the beating increased ten-fold. It sounded as though whatever was inside was trying to beating it's way through the door. We backed away, all of us unwilling to have a part in letting whatever was inside out. The door flew open and a rush of papers flew out directly at us. They were dive bombing and rushing at us in furious little bursts of speed. They were trying to hurt us. We tried to protect ourselves but couldn't. Our hands and arms became bloody, full of paper cuts. Even our faces were not exempt from damage. Then just as quickly they all began to fly off seperating themselves into three distinct groups. Three previously locked doors flew open allowed them own group inside than slammed shut again, locking themselves up tight.
"This is ridicious. We all know those are our hubs we need. I don't know what happened to them or why they are attaching us but we need to take control." Patty had taken control. Looking at our bedraggled little group she decided what to do.
"Zsuzsy and I will take the first door. RedElf and Enelle Lamb you take the second door. Ladyjane1 and KoffeeKlatch Gals you take the third door. And Rippmaker, you stay in the hall just incase one of us need help."
Health HubNuggets
Patty and Zsuzsy cautiously approached the first door. As they reached out to turn the knob the door flew open. They stood their waiting to be attacked, when nothing happened they walked into the room and looked around.
Reaching out and grabbing the closest one Patty and Zsuzsy looked at it carefully. "Why, this is one of the Health Hubs." exclaimed Zsuzsy.
Reaching out for another, Patty cried, "So is this one. And this one. Girls, I think they divided themselves up into hub subject groups. Go find out if yours did the same."
The Health Nominees
- Stonewalling: Passive-Aggressive Anger Expressed Through Silence
This isn't a fun way to live. Picture for a moment two young children getting into an argument, with one of them stomping off and shouting, “I'm not talking to you!” and then ignoring the other child... - My ADHD Problems and How I Solved Them
Attention deficit hyperactive disorder (ADD or ADHD) is a condition in the brain that comes from the person's genes. It can also develop naturally in children and sometimes adults. However, children's symptoms... - What Does An Anxiety Attack Feel Like?
What an extreme anxiety & panic attack feels like with an easy to understand explanation. Medical reasons why severe anxiety may be caused by more than thoughts alone. The perceived danger may feel so real and life-threatening when. ... - Lung Cancer and My Mother
Pictured Rocks National Lakeshore (Upper Michigan) Her name was Debbie Heart, and she was my mother. My whole life, I always looked up to her. She worked at the Village of Skokie, helping... - Five Tips for Curing the Winter Blues
They creep in around mid-January every year: those awful blues. No matter where we go or whom we talk to, folks grumble about feeling run-down, depressed, and simply "over" winter. And for those of us who...
Which one of this week's Health nominees is your favorite?
- 49% Stonewalling: Passive-Aggressive Anger Expressed Through Silence
- 4% My ADHD Problems and How I Solved Them
- 13% What Does An Anxiety Attack Feel Like?
- 17% Lung Cancer and My Mother
- 3% Soil-Therapy for The Hands and Heart
- 14% Five Tips for Curing the Winter Blues
This poll is now closed to voting.
Books, Literature and Writing
Opening up their door RedElf and Enelle Lamb found their papers still flying around but they no longer seemed eager to escape. Reaching up and picking one of them out of the air Enelle Lamb lokked at it for a few seconds then said "RedElf, this one is from the Books, Literature, and Writing category.
RedElf, busily looking at a paper herself, said "So, is this one." Looking up, "They're seem to be waiting for us to just pluck them out of the air."
They began to quickly gather up their hub papers.
The Books, Literature, and Writing Nominees
- The sisters
As they stood in shock staring at the old man -who lay shrivelled on the floor, the blood pouring out of him- he moaned as his body jerked around. Marissa felt only sorrow for him. She had known this man for... - E-books? E-gad!
I am a Paperback Purist. At least that’s what CBS Sunday Morning called me. I love the feel of holding a real book in my hands. I love to peek at the top and see how many pages I’ve gone through.... - How To Lose a Reader in 10 Seconds
A good number of you are familiar with the Kate Hudson movie titled “How to Lose a Guy in 10 Days”. If you are not, let me say that as movies go, you’re not missing much. It’s a kind of watery,... - Reflection on "Tuesdays with Morrie"
Reflection on Tuesdays with Morrie Have you read this book " Tuesdays with Morrie"? It is one of the best selling books on the planet earth. Here in my hub, I post my personal... - Finding Your Niche as a Writer
Somewhere out there is a perfect writer. They can write about any subject, at any time, quickly and effortlessly. Their final result always makes them sound like the worlds greatest expert on the subject,...
Which one of this week's Books, Literature, and Writing nominees is your favorite?
- 37% The sisters
- 16% E-books? E-gad!
- 20% How To Lose a Reader in 10 Seconds
- 6% How Tolkien Succeeded
- 4% Reflection on "Tuesdays with Morrie"
- 16% Finding Your Niche as a Writer
This poll is now closed to voting.
Travel and Places
In the third room Ladyjane1 and myself (KKG) were grabbing papers out of the air as quickly as we could. Our subject group was Travel and Places. By now we had all figured that somehow these hub papers had found their way inside this spooky old house, waited for us, andperfectly divided themselves into their own subject groups.
We didn't know how this all happened but we were thrilled. We would be able to get together that important HubNugget Nominee list in time. It was worth all of those paper cuts.
The Travel and Places Nominees
- Top Girlfriend Getaways for Summer
I first became aware of "girlfriend getaways" about ten years ago when my 71-year-old mother told me she and three friends were driving up to the Berkshires and New Hampshire to visit a doll factory (the... - Alaska Our Way
Alaska, land of the incredible views and wildlife. Everyone should see this wonderful state. - 5 Out of the Ordinary (Yet Totally Ordinary) Places to Go in Toronto
When people ask me why I love Toronto so much, I often reply with "Take all that New York City has to offer and remove the bad stuff. That's Toronto." Maybe that is a little unfair to Toronto since it has its... - Day Trips from Vancouver, Canada
One of the beauties of Vancouver is its proximity to a number of nearby hot spots. Here are five easy daytrips from Vancouver - some are the secret pride of the locals (until now). - A Road Less Taken
One of the reasons why I enjoy traveling is when I come across a hidden paradise in a corner of the world that is virtually untouched by an abundance of tourists; it makes me feel like Marco Polo, discovering... - Redheads and Rebels? The Truth Behind Irish Stereotypes
The Irish must be one of the most stereotyped groups of people on the planet. There are the semi-positive ones: leprechauns, red heads and being great storytellers. Then there are the negative ones: heavy...
Which one of this week's Travel and Places nominees is your favorite?
- 3% Top Girlfriend Getaways for Summer
- 7% Alaska Our Way
- 1% 5 Out of the Ordinary (Yet Totally Ordinary) Places to Go in Toronto
- 60% Day Trips from Vancouver, Canada
- 9% A Road Less Taken
- 19% Redheads and Rebels? The Truth Behind Irish Stereotypes
This poll is now closed to voting.
A Happy Ending
Ripplemaker, our resident cheerleader, kept us going through that long night. We had to work around the clock to make sure we read each hub that was eligible and pick out the nominees. It wasn't an easy job, especially after our day. However, we've never let you down before and would not do so this time.
Oh, by the way, we never did figure out what all of the weird happenings were all about. Just after we finished geting the list of HubNugget Nominees together the computers began to work - it was a miracle. It was a happy ending for a very strange day here in Hub Land.
HubNugget Wannabes and How To Become One
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How do I get on the HubNugget Wannabe list?
HubNugget Wannabe is a well written and presented hub by someone who has been with hubpages for less than 90 days and has an author score of 75 or more. The hub needs to have been published within the last 7 days and have a hub score of at least 55.
- So what's in it for you?
Well, I'll tell you. First of traffic to your hub is really going to soar, this means more people will be reading your writing. This can only lead to a more fans following you. The title of your hub will be posted in the HubNugget forum-thread, you'll recieve a wonderful letter of congratulations from one of the HubNuggets team members and you will be featured in our newsletter.
- What are the quidelines?
To make your hub worthy of all this fame all you have to do is chose great topic, write a well-written, well-researched hub of about 800 or so words, and add a few relevant pictures and maybe even a video. Last but certainly not least, make sure you read over your work, edit carefully and remove any mistakes and then push that publish now button. Make sure you go to the hub learning center and read the following site for any questions you may have. http://learningcenter.hubpages.com/hubnuggets/
Last but not least, it very important, promote, promote, promote. Make sure you tell everyone you know to sign into hubpages, read and vote. Post it on every blog you participate in. Make sure you let people know they doen't have to join to vote.
Good luck and don't forget to vote for yourself.
Hubs to Help
- What Do You Do When Someone Leaves a Mean Comment on Your Hub?
When somebody leaves a comment on our hubs, we value and appreciate it. But what do you do when someone leaves a mean comment on your hub? I would like to thank Glassvisage for making this request to me... - Do You Ever Get the Feeling That Your Writing Isn't Good Enough?
Of course this question pops up for everyone here on Hubpages all the time I am sure, and the answer for me is yes! Of course there are many times, especially in the beginning, when I thought that my writing... - HubNuggets How-To, Q & A
Have you always wondered what a HubNugget is and how to get in on the HubNugget action? Well, wonder no more! All you have to do is read this hub and all will be revealed. - Hubnuggets, hubnuggeteers...and the rest of the lingo defined!
After thoroughly researching some of our common words used continually here in Hubland I am totally appalled at the many spelling mistakes and misappropriate definitions the everyday run of the mill...
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Beautiful, I voted and the hubs are just good. Nice presentation.
Very cool story and I voted on some wonderful hubs!
Nicely done Gal very suspenseful...voted and voted up, cheers.
You brought to mind when I was an intern and we had an exam to take. I got my paers out for a last review. the room was sot of warm and one of the guys-a former pilot-came in an turn on a fan full blast and scattered all my papers.
I loved your story and I also enjoyed to read the hubs from many talanted hubbers! Voted on the best!
A truly funny story and very creative. Thumbs up! :) Congratulations to all nominees and I hope there is a great turn out. Shared with followers and Facebook, and off to check out nominees and vote. :) Thank you. :) :D
I was hooked from the first sentence - loved the suspense! Great story! What fun we all had - except for being scared silly and having to wait for all those stinging paper cuts to heal before I can get writing again - "Oh, my paws and whiskers!" What we don't do for the team :D
Congrats to all the nominees!
It was certainly scary for a while there...my fur is still sticking up in places! (I don't do scary well LOL) Good thing I had everyone for company or those hubs would still be flying around!
Great story! I'm honored to be nominated. Thank you!
Those are some fun Hubs! Thanks for sharing with us. :)
Next time we're going on a picnic I'll remember to bring an antibiotic ointment. My paper cuts are getting infected.
Gal, great hub about our newest adventure. Read and voted for my favorites, which as always is a hard job.
Congrats to all of you nominees. Oh before I forget... Hubnuggeteers remember to promote your hubs. Voters do not have to be Hubpages members so make sure that each and every one of your family and friends to reads and votes for your hub. Good luck
Thanks so much for the nomination! It's an honor to be mentioned with so many talented writers :)
Such fun of a story.
Wow, as if I was watching a suspense movie. Thanks KGG! Congrats to all new HubNuggets Wannabes! Read, voted and rated!!!
Fascinating !!!
Take care
Eiddwen.
Great round of hubs this week! Read, bookmarked some, commented some, and voted.
Great idea about flapping pages cutting us up. Will have to wear a rubberized-vinyl cat suit and mask for protection on subsequent adventures!
Voted in each category and hope others continue to vote all week.
Cheers!
This hub had me in its grasp. Amazing writing.
Hi KoffeeKlatch Gals, absolutely an enthralling hub! I enjoyed the suspense and the happy ending, of course :) Cheers....on my way to visit the hubs! Be back soon.
I have enjoyed my hubnuggets reading. Thank you for this great compilation. Voted, voted and voted! Enjoy the weekend everyone :)
Very imaginative presentation. Who would've thought...
Enjoyed and voted :)
How creative that you created a mystery for the nominees. I was captivated:)
This hub was really great. There were some very good hubs and I've voted.
This hub is very interesting.Good job. Keep it up.
Trying to become a frequent visitor and voter. Thanks for an entertaining introduction to this week's hubnuggets.
I never get involve with hubnugget. But I am glad to read your review. Well done. Thank you very much. God bless you!
Prasetio,
wondered what a HubNugget is and how to get in on the HubNugget action.
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chspublish Level 5 Commenter 14 months ago
Wery clever use of language and the skill of building suspense and interest. Absolutley outstanding.